Entity

by Meark
created Aug 31, 2013
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/ 37 votes

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/ 15 votes


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First time adding an actual storyline to my map. Let me know what you guys think.
Edit: I forgot to mention that this song goes great with this song or pretty much any of his songs. xD
edited Aug 31, 2013

21 comments

Probably not Towelie
said Aug 31, 2013
Yeesh, blows any of my story maps out of the water, excellent work on this one
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Thank you. The story isn't too cliche?
Probably not Towelie
said Aug 31, 2013
Oh not at all, definitely not what I was expecting that's for sure. And you managed to immerse the player in the world you were talking about perfectly. Really great job in my opinion.
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Thanks. I got the idea of things appearing from SubparFiddle's Mandingo map.
Probably not Towelie
said Aug 31, 2013
I guess you are his reincarnation because I haven't seen any of his maps out for awhile haha
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Maybe the update will bring him back.
voxanimus
said Aug 31, 2013
subpar is gone cause the place he lives doesn't have enough internet access for him to be active on the atlas/reddit etc. he posted saying so in the sub earlier this week
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Bummer. :(
voxanimus
said Aug 31, 2013
dude. amazing. looks like i gotta finish up that storyline map i've been sitting on :D
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Thank you.  I can't wait to play it when you're done. :)
DouBLe
said Aug 31, 2013
Too many ground boosts to optimize for my tastes. e_e

Very good map, though.
Meark
said Aug 31, 2013
Sorry about that. I thought about it a little when making the map. Thank you though.
Furkiepurkie
said Sep 1, 2013
Administrator
You are God.
invert
said Sep 1, 2013
i'd say this map is godlike
Meark
said Sep 1, 2013
Hahaha thank you both.
Kuroonehalf
said Sep 1, 2013
Ooph, putting that big ground boost section at the end is kinda mean.
Meark
said Sep 1, 2013
Hahaha sorry I didn't mean for it to be mean.
WBojangles
said Sep 2, 2013
Found this one powerful! I think the visuals/timing work well to carry the story. I like the progression of transparency depth as real-world depth (and, as a side note, those trees with the bobbly circles.. super cute touch). My favorite part is that the role of the entity isn't forced, it's left open to whatever character. Like no "play as ____."
Meark
said Sep 3, 2013
Ah thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :D I tried not to limit the entity to a specific character.
c.C
said Sep 7, 2013
BE MY TEACHER!
Meark
said Sep 8, 2013
What would you like to know?

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