Answer 1

Yeesh, blows any of my story maps out of the water, excellent work on this one

Answer 2

Thank you. The story isn't too cliche?

Answer 3

Oh not at all, definitely not what I was expecting that's for sure. And you managed to immerse the player in the world you were talking about perfectly. Really great job in my opinion.

Answer 4

Thanks. I got the idea of things appearing from SubparFiddle's Mandingo map.

Answer 5

I guess you are his reincarnation because I haven't seen any of his maps out for awhile haha

Answer 6

Maybe the update will bring him back.

Answer 7

subpar is gone cause the place he lives doesn't have enough internet access for him to be active on the atlas/reddit etc. he posted saying so in the sub earlier this week

Answer 8

Bummer. :(

Answer 9

dude. amazing. looks like i gotta finish up that storyline map i've been sitting on :D

Answer 10

Thank you.  I can't wait to play it when you're done. :)

Answer 11

Too many ground boosts to optimize for my tastes. e_e

Very good map, though.

Answer 12

Sorry about that. I thought about it a little when making the map. Thank you though.

Answer 13

You are God.

Answer 14

i'd say this map is godlike

Answer 15

Hahaha thank you both.

Answer 16

Ooph, putting that big ground boost section at the end is kinda mean.

Answer 17

Hahaha sorry I didn't mean for it to be mean.

Answer 18

Found this one powerful! I think the visuals/timing work well to carry the story. I like the progression of transparency depth as real-world depth (and, as a side note, those trees with the bobbly circles.. super cute touch). My favorite part is that the role of the entity isn't forced, it's left open to whatever character. Like no "play as ____."

Answer 19

Ah thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :D I tried not to limit the entity to a specific character.

Answer 20

BE MY TEACHER!

Answer 21

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