Answer 1

Much better route! I like it. It could still do with a slope at the start to give you a speed boost but i like the new layout.

Answer 2

thank you i forgot about that but i don't want to re uploaded sorry .

Answer 3

I also like maps with little stories. And the any% route is fun.

Answer 4

Awesome, I can see that you put a lot of work in the decorations, map looks really beautiful!

Answer 5

could use some deathzones.  route was a little confusing and first playthrough i found 2-3 areas where i would just fall forever and have to restart

Answer 6

Yeah deathzones are your friend, or even just spike pits well below the normal view.  I've come to prefer that because I like the sound effect spikes make on death more than the awkward silence of death zones.

Answer 7

oohhhh i for got about those note taken put death zone in places you i don't want you guy to go. ( like before a secret ಥ_ಥ

Answer 8

I like it! It is nice that you took a lot of time in to decorating the map :) If you want someone to test your maps like you stated in the map notes you can add me on steam :3

Answer 9

or come ask the community to test your map here: http://client01.chat.mibbit.com/#dustforce@irc2.speedrunslive.com