Answer 1

Really good for a first map! One thing I would recommend is making it more clear the general "flow" of the map. Sometimes large areas can be fun to figure out, but in the case of this map you can't really save yourself if you mess up --- you start to go one way and realize you need to go back but can't save yourself.

But good use of experimenting with camera, fog trigger and such. Try and play some more custom levels to get a feel of what you like/don't like and try and replicate it!

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