Answer 1

Art is sick. I really like the heaven part; very very cool. The gameplay, however, is lacking a bit. Its hard to know where to go without cameras.

I know cameras can be a bit daunting at first, but just a simple zoomout helps this maps a lot.
https://streamable.com/7arw this is how it looks with a simple 1500 zoom. A bit excessive perhaps, but it works.

Answer 2

Hey that does make it better!  I am learning new things about the editor every time I play around with it haha.

Answer 3

generally speaking, you should avoid making maps that you yourself cannot SS. this map was hard, and in a frustratingly "cheap" way. camera problems and unclear triggers should not be obstacles to the player.

Answer 4

I SSed it shortly after you said I couldn't after reading your comment XD.  I know, I am still just learning the editor still.  The other commentor showed me the camera thing and I been playing with it in game so any future maps will have this functionality.  

I usually place things on the max distance I can go while editing.  I was playing it over and over to make sure everything is doable and not overly difficult.  What trigger were you referring to?  Just so I know to avoid something like that in the future.