Answer 1

>1 min = short? :u

Neat map in any case.

Answer 2

I only really started playing the game this week, I don't know how lengths work haha! Glad you liked it tho!

Answer 3

There aren't really any ways to get any sort of speed on this level because it seems everything is put in a place "because it can be" rather than "because it should be".

Also
Short = 10-20 seconds
Medium = 20-45
Long = 45+
ish

This is most definitely a long map :p

My advice would be to start off with shorter maps first, or even play a bit more of the game to understand some more of the mechanics (you said you only started this week).

Fairly good for a first try though. :D

Answer 4

For the record, I second playing more of the game, and more custom maps, before really delving into making your own.  Next time please give it a music trigger, it defaults to "Safe Place to Sleep".

Answer 5

Blue Man Dust Friend is my favorite character too, meow.

Answer 6

This feels a lot like moon temple.

Answer 7

For a first map you have a lot of good ideas! You definitely are on the way to making great visual maps, they can use some touching up but the shapes feel fleshed-out and real.

Gameplay-wise is where the map suffers, there were a lot of times that I found myself frantically scanning my screen for which patch of leaves was the logical "next" one, and there were a few parts that I couldn't really figure out a "right" way to do it.

Overall, the actions seem a bit scattered, and lack the flow and direction that I look for when playing most maps. I think the concept is good, it shows promise, but this map needs work. I look forward to future creations :)

Answer 8

Not a bad start. Like a couple of others have mentioned, the routes are kind of all over the place and it makes the first few playthroughs pretty confusing.

I would recommend playing the game more and taking a look at some of the higher quality maps in Atlas to get a better understanding of good level design.

Happy mapping!